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thought That it was finally over, the pain and hardships, the nauseating scent of hospital disinfectant, the scratchy sheets of the beds. For the past year, I have been in and out of hospitals almost every week. I missed half of 6th grade, was fine for 7th and basically missed all of 8th and thats where I am now, I should be celebrating the last week of 8th grade with my friends but instead I'm half conscious, lying in the ICU. Ive been here before but the only things I remember are searing pains with every breath and a lot of gross medicine. 3 years ago, Things were great, I had best friend, and tons of other friends, My Hair was long, and sleek everyone liked me other than a few people who thought that I was just a perfect idiot. It was those people who thought I deserved this, cancer. They diagnosed me with lung cancer in my right lung when I was 11, I was still a kid and I didn't get it, that I would probably die soon and that it hurts, so so bad.
thought That it was finally over, the pain and hardships, the nauseating scent of hospital disinfectant, the scratchy sheets of the beds. For the past year, I have been in and out of hospitals almost every week. I missed half of 6th grade, was fine for 7th and basically missed all of 8th and thats where I am now, I should be celebrating the last week of 8th grade with my friends but instead I'm half conscious, lying in the ICU. Ive been here before but the only things I remember are searing pains with every breath and a lot of gross medicine. 3 years ago, Things were great, I had best friend, and tons of other friends, My Hair was long, and sleek everyone liked me other than a few people who thought that I was just a perfect idiot. It was those people who thought I deserved this, cancer. They diagnosed me with lung cancer in my right lung when I was 11, I was still a kid and I didn't get it, that I would probably die soon and that it hurts, so so bad.
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